Talk:I Remember You (Adventure Time)/GA1
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Reviewer: SL93 (talk · contribs) 00:07, 2 August 2013 (UTC)
- Well written -
- "However, he misinterprets her feelings and tries to kiss her, Marceline angrily confronts him and asks if he remembers his past by calling him by his actual name: Simon." isn't written correctly. Maybe add when to the sentence, as in "However, when he misinterprets her feelings and tries to kiss her, Marceline angrily confronts him and asks if he remembers his past by calling him by his actual name: Simon".
- "Marceline takes the stuffed animal, stops crying, and looks up in happiness." sounds awkward. Maybe "Marceline takes the stuffed animal, which causes her to stop crying, and then looks up in happiness".
- "According her, the shirt that Marceline wears was "loosely based off a stretched out old D.A.R.E. shirt". I think that you mean "According to her". (needs to be fixed)
- Verifiable with no original research - Everything is cited accurately. While websites such as YouTube are normally considered sources that cannot be used, they are acceptable in this case.
- Broad in its coverage - The article gives broad coverage without unnecessary detail. The article gives relevant background information to the television series itself.
- Neutral - The article is neutral, neither promoting something negative or positive.
- Stable - The article is stable.
- Images - The image in the infobox has a proper fair use rationale. The second image is free use on Commons. Both of the images are relevant to the article.
My suggestions on rewording are just possibilities. You don't need to use them and those three sentences are the only problems. SL93 (talk) 00:07, 2 August 2013 (UTC)