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Opening paragraph

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It reads like an advertisement for a particular ice bar. I'll be removing/rephrasing the majority of the part discussing the particular bar; I don't even think most of it is really necessary for Encyclopaedic purposes. FinalDeity (talk) 03:26, 15 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Did a quick google and found out why - the entire opening paragraph was copy-pasted from http://www.minnesotaicesculptures.com/ice-bar/ . I removed the part that is basically an advertisement, but I imagine the rest might need a once or twice-over. FinalDeity (talk) 03:30, 15 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]