Talk:Ieremia Tabai/GA1

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Nominator: Thebiguglyalien (talk · contribs) 19:25, 10 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: TheNuggeteer (talk · contribs) 11:43, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! Leaving a note here mostly for my own benefit that I'll need to address Talk:Ieremia Tabai#Birthday and full name before this passes. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 05:18, 2 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Whats 'i-Kiribati'? You should probably change it to 'Kiribati'.
According to MOS:LEADLENGTH (as part of the lead sections requirement) the recommended lead length for this article (3,000 words) is two or three paragraphs. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:03, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Source 1 does not exactly state frugality.
where he had to work through his stutter to give a speech in an oratory club What makes the speech special to make it mentioned in the article?
in particular having a great influence on him A bit suspicious by the 'great' here, maybe 'strong'? 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:03, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Many of the sources here are inaccessible book sources, AGF'ing them. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:03, 28 August 2024 (UTC) Reviewing the rest later! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:03, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]