Talk:Ieremia Tabai/GA1
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Nominator: Thebiguglyalien (talk · contribs) 19:25, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: TheNuggeteer (talk · contribs) 11:43, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Going to review this! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
11:43, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks! Leaving a note here mostly for my own benefit that I'll need to address Talk:Ieremia Tabai#Birthday and full name before this passes. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 05:18, 2 September 2024 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- Whats 'i-Kiribati'? You should probably change it to 'Kiribati'.
- According to MOS:LEADLENGTH (as part of the lead sections requirement) the recommended lead length for this article (3,000 words) is two or three paragraphs.
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
12:03, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Education
[edit]- Source 1 does not exactly state frugality.
where he had to work through his stutter to give a speech in an oratory club
What makes the speech special to make it mentioned in the article?in particular having a great influence on him
A bit suspicious by the 'great' here, maybe 'strong'?🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
12:03, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Other comments
[edit]Many of the sources here are inaccessible book sources, AGF'ing them. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
12:03, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Reviewing the rest later! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
12:03, 28 August 2024 (UTC)