Talk:If We Are the Body/GA1
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Reviewer: 0z (talk · contribs) 10:24, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
General
[edit]- Theres one dead link
Replaced the link. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- Is there a single cover?
- Not that I could find, no. It is a bit unusual, but I don't think there was one.
- July 23, 2003 > July 26, 2003
- Mention the studios and locations in Recorded
Lead
[edit]- Mention the song's release date and record label
- Link [[Music journalism|music critics]]
Background and recording
[edit]- The album was > The song was
Composition
[edit]- Remove According to the sheet music published by Musicnotes.com, → Not needed
- You say "the song" a lot here. Replace some of them with "If We Are the Body" or "it"
- Cut down total from 20 to 11. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
- Link [[Refrain|chorus]]
Critical reception and accolades
[edit]- Link [[Music journalism|music critics]]
- Remove Mark Hall link. You've already linked the name in Background and recording.
Chart performance
[edit]- Remove self-titled debut album link
Live performances
[edit]- Link set list
- Casting performed > Casting Crowns performed
- setlist > set list
Credits and personnel
[edit]- No issues
Charts
[edit]- No issues
Release and radio history
[edit]- No issues
References
[edit]- FN2 – missing publisher
- FN4 – remove CCM Magazine and Salem Publishing links
- FN5 – fix dash
- FN6 – theres two dot points after Apple Inc
- FN9 – theres two dot points after the S in the author's name
- FN10 – remove the Christianity Today link
- FN11 – fix dash
- FN12 – use the "Cite news" template because the source is a newspaper article
- Citation was replaced so point is not relevant anymore. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
- FN13 – fix dash
- FN14 – Fix dash. Also, remove Radio & Records and VNU Media links.
- FN15 – remove the Christianity Today link
- FN16 – Remove Billboard link. Also, publisher is missing.
- FN17 to FN22 – remove Billboard and Prometheus Global Media links
- FN23 – Remove Billboard and VNU Media links. Also, the original url is missing.
- Done, but the original url does not exist anymore. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
- FN25 & FN26 – remove Jesus Freak Hideout links
- FN27 – use the "Cite news" template
- FN29 – use the "Cite news" template
- FN30 – fix dash
- FN31 to FN34 – remove Billboard and Prometheus Global Media links
Summary
[edit]Great work! Article is well written. On hold for 7 days. — Oz (talk) 11:53, 3 October 2012 (UTC)
- I fixed the issues. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
- Passed. — Oz (talk) 20:51, 4 October 2012 (UTC)