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GA Review

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Reviewer: Kailash29792 (talk · contribs)
I will be reviewing this within the next 24 hours. Kailash29792 (talk) 13:27, 25 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • Although the lead has three paragraphs (which is suitable enough), is it possible to extend the first and third para's? If not, never mind.
  •  Done: Extended a bit.—Prashant 11:27, 26 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

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  • The majority of reviews, such as Janhvi Patel's review and The Hindu do not contain any quotations by the reviewers. I believe some can be added.
I think its has adequate quotes.—Prashant 11:27, 26 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is Bollywood Life a reliable source? If yes, then it can stay.
Yes, It is reliable. Its a part of Zee News and DNA.—Prashant 11:27, 26 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Commercial performance

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  • "In My City" was a commercially successful in India. What grammar is that?

Promotions

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  • Is there any better name for this section? Or is this the best that can be? Or will "Marketing" do?
  • Are you intending on creating an article on DJ Nash? If not, please remove the link as it is red.
  •  Done: Removed redlinks and i didn't found a better name as Chopra was promoting. So, i think it fair.—Prashant 11:27, 26 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Music video

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  • A behind-the-scenes video documenting the making of "In My City" was shown during an NFL game on 13 September 2012. "behind-the-scenes" sounds colloquial, and the term is not in the supporting source. Also, is there any alternative for the term "shown" which sounds juvenile?
  • The video (directed by Joseph Kahn) was released on 29 January 2013. I'd prefer The video, directed by Joseph Kahn, was released on 29 January 2013.

Overall

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These are the only comments I have. Once they have been resolved, the article can pass. Other minor issues have been taken care of by me. Kailash29792 (talk) 08:54, 26 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Final verdict
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Congratulations Prashant! I'm also happy that I could finish this review in less than 24 hours. Kailash29792 (talk) 12:00, 26 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]