Talk:In Your Honor/GA1
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Reviewer: Burningclean (talk · contribs) 21:09, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
- The first sentence of the Background section is kind of off. Maybe something like "After touring in support of One by One, Dave Grohl was uncertain on what to do next with the Foo Fighters. He felt that rushing to do another record would not be creatively rewarding."
- I don't know if there is any rule to this, but I think maybe saying the studio was 'named' Studio 606 would be better than being 'baptized' Studio 606. The word 'baptized' seems slang somehow.
- "The album's whole development took nine months,[6] with three and a half months spent installing the equipments of the studio, and the songs being written across 2004." I would rework this to "Development for In Your Honor took nine months,[6] with three and a half months intalling equipment in the studio, and songs being written throughout 2004."
- "Studio 606 was not even finished as the band moved in, even helping with the final stages of construction." This feels confusing to me. Do you mean that the band helped finish constructing the studio? If so, could you specifiy that please?
Other than those few small details, all is good. The sourcing is fantastic on this. Burningclean [speak] 21:09, 14 June 2012 (UTC)