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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:52, 27 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • Weblink in infobox doesn't work.
  • "Eventually, the team did not win any medal." -> "The team did not win any medals."
  • "1945—1949)" en, not emdashes for date ranges.
  • "In 1951 Indonesia competed in the first Asian Games in 1951" Unless there were actually two Asian Games in 1951, one of those 1951's in the sentence needs to go.
  • Don't assume everyone knows what the IOC is. Even on an article like this.
  • The results would look better as tables under each event's description, see most other X at the yyyy Olympics GA's of late.
  • Done. Thanks for the suggestion. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • "he ran a time" Swam a time, perhaps?
  • No need to capitalise Heat Five.
  • ".[8][9][4]" Citations go in numerical order
  • ". His best completed lifts from each variants" No need for the s on variant.
  • The last three EL's seem to duplicate content from the various Sports Reference pages you've actually cited. Could lose them.
  • Images look fine, article is stable.

Courcelles (talk) 21:11, 27 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Courcelles: Thanks for your review. I've updated the article, please take a look at my responses above. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good. Will promote when I get home and off my phone. Courcelles (talk) 16:55, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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