Talk:Italian cruiser Agordat/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:08, 25 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

And this one as well.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:08, 25 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

No DABs and external links work fine.
2-shaft triple-expansion engines Better rendered in the infobox as 2 shafts; 2 triple-expansion steam engines because each engine drove one shaft. And tell the reader in the main body that TE engines are steam engines.
1. of shafts should be added to main body.
- Added both
Agordat was stationed in the 2nd Division of the 1st Squadron Do you mean assigned here? or her location and assignment?
- Yeah, I was just trying to get some variety, but the more I look at it, it doesn't really work here.
Missing OCLC # for Beehler. And how about links for his book, Garbett and Phelps?
- Added oclcs for all of them.
Make the necessary changes in the class article and Coatit as well.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:17, 31 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Done.
  - @Sturmvogel 66: - anything else need to be done here? Parsecboy (talk) 14:26, 17 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for the delay, but is the figure of 300 nmi for her range correct? That seems absurdly low for a cruiser, even a jumped-up gunboat like this one.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:11, 17 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Yeah, Conway's specifically mentioned their very short range as being a significant handicap and why they didn't see much use. Parsecboy (talk) 16:23, 17 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]