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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:18, 6 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:18, 6 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria[edit]

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a checkY
    1.b checkY
  • 2
    2.a checkY
    2.b checkY
    2.c checkY
    2.d checkY (0.0%)
  • 3
    3.a checkY
    3.b checkY
  • 4
    4.a checkY
  • 5
    5.a checkY
  • 6
    6.a checkY
    6.b checkY
  • No DAB links checkY
  • No Dead links checkY

Prose Suggestions[edit]

  • When the war ended on 11 November 1918, the wing's personnel began to straggle home. suggest When the war ended on 11 November 1918, the wing's personnel began to return home.

Operational history[edit]

  • Jagdgeschwader II (Fighter Wing II, or JG II) came into being because suggest Jagdgeschwader II (Fighter Wing II, or JG II) was created because
  • but were beginning to receive Fokker Dr.1 triplanes on 16 February. suggest either but were beginning to receive Fokker Dr.1 triplanes by 16 February. or else but began to receive Fokker Dr.1 triplanes on 16 February.
  • @Georgejdorner: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:07, 9 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]