Talk:Jan Mayensfield/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:29, 18 November 2012 (UTC)

I will inspecting the Jan Mayensfield aerodrome today! Seems similar to the Dorothy Scott Airport (this one is public, though, etc.). TBrandley 17:29, 18 November 2012 (UTC)

• Where is the runways information referenced, as seen in the infobox?
  • In ref 12, per the facilities section. Arsenikk ^(talk) 20:31, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
• Link "North Atlantic Treaty Organization" upon first mention after lede per WP:REPEATLINK
  • It seems to only be mentioned once in the article and then it is linked. Or have I overlooked something? Arsenikk ^(talk) 20:31, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
    • No, I don't think. TBrandley 20:37, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
• "The airport's only regular service" remove "only" per WP:NPOV; it's not huge POV, just minor, but still
  • Hm, don't really think I agree with you there, but I have changed it just in case. Arsenikk ^(talk) 20:31, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
• "by 30 meters (4,900 by 98 ft) and aligned 06–24" would change ending to "being aligned 06-24" or something
  • Fixed. Arsenikk ^(talk) 20:31, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
• I notice that most sentences regarding the airport, say "the airport", of course, but I feel that on some of them, you could say "Jan Mayensifield" to start, like "Jan Mayensifield has changing weather conditions"
  • Interesting comment :) I have added "Jan Mayensfield" twice. Arsenikk ^(talk) 20:31, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
• "The airport has changing weather conditions" don't really understand, clarify
  • Perhaps that is a slightly Norwegian term. Does "variable weather conditions" make sense? If not I'll try to find a better explanation. Arsenikk ^(talk) 20:31, 18 November 2012 (UTC)

Great work overall. Once the minor above concerns are addressed, I will pass the article based on the good article criteria. Well done and I found no concerns while inspecting the airport, very good! TBrandley 17:39, 18 November 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the express service. Arsenikk ^(talk) 20:31, 18 November 2012 (UTC)

No problem! Per your changes, I will pass the article. Well done! TBrandley 20:37, 18 November 2012 (UTC)

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