Talk:Janine K. Iannarelli

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conflict of interest[edit]

Sallyajozwiak since you declared in your edit note that you work for the subject of this article, you have a conflict of interest. Please don't edit the article directly going forward, but instead make suggestions here on the Talk page. If you click where it says "click here" in the bottom-most section of the beige box above, the wikipedia software will set up an edit request for you. Just follow the directions you will save after you click there, and save your edit, and it will appear here for others to review and implement, if it complies with our policies and guidelines. It may take some back and forth, but we can get there. That is how we manage conflict of interest in Wikipedia. Thanks. Jytdog (talk) 22:05, 29 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Request edit on 29 April 2015[edit]

Prior to the April 21, 2015 edit, there were approximately 62 References. In an attempt to limit a long string of references and clean up the Article, the edits did not maintain a neutral point of view. But the references did exist in the Wikipedia article prior to the April 21, 2015 edit. Can the Article be reverted to the version prior to April 21, 2015 without the COI flag? If yes, from that starting point, I understand that I shall offer suggested edits going forward. Please advise.

76.30.232.157 (talk) 15:38, 4 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done I'm not reverting back to an article full of spam. Joseph2302 (talk) 22:11, 17 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Request edit on 12 May 2015[edit]

Please add the following sentence and citation to the end of the first paragraph: In 2013, Iannarelli was the cover feature story of Women in Aviation's November-December issue.[1]  Not done Your source is a primary source, not a reliable source. Joseph2302 (talk) 22:27, 17 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Please add the following sentence and citation to the end of the first paragraph under the Subhead - Professional information: Among the trade, she is known as the Falcon Lady. [2][3]

plus Added Although "in the trade" wasn't needed. Joseph2302 (talk) 22:18, 17 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

replace Ms. Iannarelli has also worked with Ms. Iannarelli works

 Not done Where abouts? Joseph2302 (talk) 22:13, 17 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Please add this citation after "local excecutive and professional development groups." [4]

plus Added Joseph2302 (talk) 22:13, 17 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

To address the note for citations, please add the following hyperlink after Anthony: Anthony and the following hyperlink after John: John

 Not done Per WP:EL, external links should not be in the body of text. Plus they don't show the information. Joseph2302 (talk) 22:18, 17 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Please remove the External Link for the office in north Texas.

minus Removed Joseph2302 (talk) 22:16, 17 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Please add an External Link for Par Avion's Web site: Par Avion web site

 Not done Only external links should be to their official website. Joseph2302 (talk) 22:16, 17 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Please add the following Categories: Category:21st-century American businesspeople Category:American people of Italian descent Category:Businesspeople from Texas

76.30.232.157 (talk) 20:48, 12 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

plus Added Joseph2302 (talk) 22:16, 17 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Laboda, Amy. "It's Just Business"". Women in Aviation.
  2. ^ Hensel, Jr., Bill. "Corporate aircraft pro relies on skills, hospitality". Houston Chronicle.
  3. ^ Peron, Sylvie. "The Falcon Lady Courtier en Aviation d'Affaires".
  4. ^ Denver, Beverly. "Women Who Empower". Houston Womann Magazine.

Request edit on 12 May 2015[edit]

Please remove the word passionate

minus Removed Joseph2302 (talk) 22:20, 17 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Please remove the word the in front of Mercury, The Orchestra Refined and remove the word orchestra after Refined to eliminate the redundancy.

76.30.232.157 (talk) 20:54, 12 May 2015 (UTC)  Done Joseph2302 (talk) 22:20, 17 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Request edit on 6 June 2015[edit]

I'm am writing to inquire as to the status of the edits I suggested on 12 May 2015. Also, I am curious to know if the "Conflict of Interest" flag will be removed since the Wikipedia editors will be reviewing my suggested edits going forward. Please advise. Many thanks. Sallyajozwiak (talk) 15:21, 8 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done lots of them now. Please remember that Wikipedia has no deadline, and just because you think it's the most important thing we should be doing, that isn't necessarily the case. Joseph2302 (talk) 22:21, 17 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Request edit on 17 June 2015[edit]

Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate your help. Can you please clarify your comment about official web site? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sallyajozwiak (talk • contribs) 19:13, 17 June 2015‎

23:13, 17 June 2015 (UTC)

Sallyajozwiak, the guideline page Wikipedia:External links#Official links says (in part): "Normally, only one official link is included. ... Wikipedia does not provide a comprehensive web directory to every official website. Wikipedia does not attempt to document or provide links to every part of the subject's web presence or provide readers with a handy list of all social networking sites". I'm sure this is what Joseph2302 had in mind. (also please sign your edits with four tildes (~~~~). Thank you.) DES (talk) 00:34, 18 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Minor updates[edit]

Please replace the third paragraph under the section Professional Information with this paragraph:

Iannarelli has attended numerous industry-related seminars sponsored by the National Business Aviation Association (NBAA), Professional Aviation Maintenance Association and various manufacturers and aviation product vendors. She has served as a speaker at the European Business Aviation Association conference, to the WAI Space City chapter,[1] and local executive and professional development groups.[2] In 2010, Iannarelli was invited by AVBuyer.com to become a business aviation industry blogger - Jottings From a Business Aviation Sales Professional.[3]


Please add this sentence to the end of paragraph 4 under the section Professional Information:

In February of 2016 Ms. Iannarelli was invited to serve on the EBAA Associate Member’s Sales and Acquisition committee[4] providing expert input on international sales transactions.


Please also replace paragraph 5 under the section Professional Information with this paragraph:

In January 2016, Ms. Iannarelli was reappointed and named presiding officer by Governor Greg Abbott to the Texas Aerospace and Aviation Advisory Committee.[5] Ms. Iannarelli was originally appointed to the committee by former Governor Rick Perry in October 2014. As one of 10 state-wide appointed committee members, she works to seek out and encourage business development specific to her area of expertise in the State. In 2011, Fort Worth Business Press was one of 18 women named as a Great Woman of Texas.[6] In April 2016, Ms. Iannarelli was named by the Texas Women’s Chamber of Commerce as one of the final four for the Texas Business Woman of the Year.[7]


Please also replace the first paragraph under Charitable Causes with this paragraph:

Ms. Iannarelli is a supporter of the arts and charities that benefit children and animals.[8] A past board member of Mercury, The Orchestra Refined, she served as underwriting chair of the inaugural 2009 gala and Co-chair for the 2010 gala both of which netted in excess of $100,000 in contributions.[9][10]. Ms. Iannarelli is a sponsor of the Houston Police Department's Mounted Patrol.[11]


Thank you for your assistance in updating Ms. Iannarelli's page.

Sallyajozwiak (talk) 18:55, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "WAI Space City chapter homepage".
  2. ^ Denver, Beverly. "Women Who Empower". Houston Woman Magazine.
  3. ^ "The Biz Av Bloggers". AvBuyer.com.
  4. ^ "EBAA ASsociate Member's Sales and Acquisition committee".
  5. ^ "Texas Aerospace and Aviation Advisory Committee".
  6. ^ "2011 Great Women of Texas". Fort Worth Business Press. October 2011.
  7. ^ "Texas Business Woman of the Year".
  8. ^ Pennino, Laura M. (June 2012). "Corporate Citizenship - Why business invests time, money, and energy for good causes". Change Magazine.
  9. ^ "Mercury Board of Directors".
  10. ^ Payne, Larry. "Interchange Show". KPFT Radio.
  11. ^ "City of Houston Mounted Patrol Unit".

Request edit on 18 October 2016[edit]

I ask that you please consider the following changes to this Wikipedia article:

Under Professional Information. The suggested changes are:

Please remove the second sentence that begins "Ms. Iannarelli has also worked directly with designated representatives ..."

In the third paragraph, please remove the first sentence - "Iannarelli has attended numerous industry-related seminars sponsored by the National Business Aviation Association (NBAA), Professional Aviation Maintenance Association and various manufacturers and aviation product vendors."

Please add this sentence to the end of paragraph 4 (the paragraph starts with the sentence "She is a current member of the National Business Aviation Association ..."): In February of 2016, Ms. Iannarelli was invited to serve on the EBAA Associate Members Sales and Acquisition committee[1] providing expert input on international sales transactions.

Please also replace paragraph 5 under the section Professional Information with this paragraph: In January 2016, Ms. Iannarelli was reappointed and named presiding officer by Governor Greg Abbott to the Texas Aerospace and Aviation Advisory Committee.[2] Ms. Iannarelli was originally appointed to the committee by former Governor Rick Perry in October 2014. As one of 10 state-wide appointed committee members, she works to seek out and encourage business development specific to her area of expertise in the State. In 2011, Iannarelli was one of 18 women named as a Great Woman of Texas by the Fort Worth Business Press.[3] In April 2016, Ms. Iannarelli was named by the Texas Women’s Chamber of Commerce as one of the final four for the Texas Business Woman of the Year.[4] Iannarelli was inducted into the Aviation Hall of Fame of New Jersey in September of 2016 at its 43rd Annual Induction Dinner along with astronaut Robert J. Cenker and aviation technology innovator William McE. Miller, Jr.[5] Iannarelli was one of the 10 successful women in Houston, Texas named as the class of 2016 for the Texas Ececutive Women (TEW)/Women on the Move award.[6]


Under Early Life and Education, the following edits are suggested:

Please remove the first paragraph that starts with "The third child of Jean and..."

In the second paragraph that starts with "Janine Iannarelli attended Fair Lawn Public Schools...", please remove the following sentence: "She then moved to Houston, where she studied the French language at L'Alliance Francaise de Houston.[19] and earned continuing education credits from Rice University."

In the third paragraph that starts with "Iannerelli is an accomplished equestrian...", please remove the following sentences: "She competed for more than 30 years in the amateur divisions at hunter/jumper shows at the regional and national level in the United States. Additionally, Iannarelli is an avid cyclist and includes yoga and other strength building activities to her personal fitness regime."


Please also replace the first paragraph under Charitable Causes with this paragraph: Ms. Iannarelli is a supporter of the arts and charities that benefit children and animals.[7] A past board member of Mercury, The Orchestra Refined, she served as underwriting chair of the inaugural 2009 gala and Co-chair for the 2010 gala both of which netted in excess of $100,000 in contributions.[8][9] Ms. Iannarelli is a sponsor of the Houston Police Department's Mounted Patrol.[10]

Please also remove this sentence in the second paragraph under Charitable Causes: "In 2002, Janine was recruited to chair the Houston Chapter of the National Women’s Board and Friends of Northwood University."

Thank you for your consideration of these changes to Ms. Iannarelli's page.

Requestor has another Wikipedia username of sallyjoz. Sallyajozwiak (talk) 21:52, 25 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "European Business Aviation Association Associate Members Advisory Council Sales and Acquisitions Committee". March 30, 2016.
  2. ^ "Governor Abbott Names Presiding Officer And Appoints 10 To The Aerospace And Aviation Advisory Committee". Office of the Governor Greg Abbot. January 28, 2016.
  3. ^ "2011 Great Women of Texas". Ft. Worth Business Press. October 2011.
  4. ^ "Awestruck: Four self-made Texas stars with ample AWE•ttitude© show that Awe is your Wow factor, and Attitude is Everything in success". Women's Chamber of Commerce of Texas.
  5. ^ Capitani, Cindy (August 27, 2016). "Fair Lawn "Falcon Lady" Among Three Inducted At Teterboro Hall Of Fame". Ridgefield Park-Hasbrouck Heights Daily Voice.
  6. ^ "Business Jet Broker Janine Iannarelli Finalist for Texas Businesswoman of the Year". Texas Executive Women. September 23, 2016.
  7. ^ Pennino, Laura M. (June 2012). "Corporate Citizenship - Why business invests time, money, and energy for good causes". Change Magazine.
  8. ^ "Mercury Board of Directors".
  9. ^ Payne, Larry. "Interchange Show". KPFT Radio.
  10. ^ "Houston (TX) Police Department - Mounted Patrol Unit". The City of Houston.

COI - Connected contributor paid[edit]

Sallyajozwiak (talk) 18:58, 20 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Cleanup - neutral point of view[edit]

Please help improve this article if you can.

Sallyajozwiak (talk) 19:14, 20 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Request edit on 20 December 2017[edit]

Please replace first paragraph with this paragraph to present neutral point of view:

Janine K. Iannarelli (born March 15, 1961) is a business aircraft broker. She is the founder and president of the aircraft marketing firm Par Avion Ltd, and has worked for over 30 years in the business aviation industry,[1][2].

Under the Professional Information section:

Please remove the second sentence as no citations can be found to support this statement: Ms. Iannarelli has also worked directly with designated representatives of the Federal Aviation Administration,[6] and with many other countries’ civil aviation authorities where she has placed or procured aircraft.

Please replace the third paragraph with this paragraph to present neutral point of view:

Iannarelli has served as a speaker at the European Business Aviation Association conference[3], Corporate Jet Investor conference[4], the WAI Space City chapter,[5] and local executive and professional development groups.[6] In 2010, Iannarelli was invited by AVBuyer.com to become a business aviation industry blogger - Jottings From a Business Aviation Sales Professional.[7]

Please add this sentence to the end of paragraph 4 (the paragraph starts with the sentence "She is a current member of the National Business Aviation Association ..."): In February of 2016, Ms. Iannarelli was invited to serve on the EBAA Associate Members Sales and Acquisition committee[8] and was appointed chair of the committee in May 2017.[9]

Please also replace paragraph 5 under the section Professional Information with this paragraph: In January 2016, Ms. Iannarelli was reappointed and named presiding officer by Governor Greg Abbott to the Texas Aerospace and Aviation Advisory Committee.[10] Ms. Iannarelli was originally appointed to the committee by former Governor Rick Perry in October 2014. In 2011, Iannarelli was one of 18 women named as a Great Woman of Texas by the Fort Worth Business Press.[11] Ms. Iannarelli was named by the Texas Women’s Chamber of Commerce as one of the final four for the Texas Business Woman of the Year in both 2016 and 2017.[12] Iannarelli was inducted into the Aviation Hall of Fame of New Jersey in September of 2016 at its 43rd Annual Induction Dinner along with astronaut Robert J. Cenker and aviation technology innovator William McE. Miller, Jr.[13] Iannarelli was one of the 10 successful women in Houston, Texas named as the class of 2016 for the Texas Executive Women (TEW)/Women on the Move award.[14] In September 2017, The Houston Business Journal announced that Ms. Iannarelli was one of the honorees for its second annual Women Who Mean Business awards.[15] In December 2017, Austin, Texas-based Girlstart,[16] announced its inaugural Houston Game Changers honorees. Ms. Iannarelli was one of four women recognized for their significant impact locally or nationally utilizing their STEM (science, technology, engineering, and math) education.[17]


Please replace the following under Early Life and Education:

Please replace the first paragraph with Of Italian descent, Ms. Iannarelli has three siblings—Susan; Anthony, an attorney in northern New Jersey; and John who served as the assistant special agent in charge for the FBI’s Phoenix office.[18]

In the second paragraph that starts with "Janine Iannarelli attended Fair Lawn Public Schools...", please remove the following sentence: "She then moved to Houston, where she studied the French language at L'Alliance Francaise de Houston.[19] and earned continuing education credits from Rice University."

In the third paragraph that starts with "Iannerelli is an accomplished equestrian...", please remove the following sentences: "She competed for more than 30 years in the amateur divisions at hunter/jumper shows at the regional and national level in the United States. Additionally, Iannarelli is an avid cyclist and includes yoga and other strength building activities to her personal fitness regime."


Please also replace the first paragraph under Charitable Causes with this paragraph: Ms. Iannarelli is a supporter of the arts and charities that benefit children and animals.[19] A past board member of Mercury, The Orchestra Refined, she served as underwriting chair of the inaugural 2009 gala and Co-chair for the 2010 gala both of which netted in excess of $100,000 in contributions.[20][21] Ms. Iannarelli is a sponsor of the Houston Police Department's Mounted Patrol.[22]

Please also remove this sentence in the second paragraph under Charitable Causes: "In 2002, Janine was recruited to chair the Houston Chapter of the National Women’s Board and Friends of Northwood University."


Thank you for your consideration of these changes to Ms. Iannarelli's page.

Requestor has another Wikipedia username of sallyjoz which has not been used for editing for several years.

Sallyajozwiak (talk · contribs) / Janine K. Iannarelli Janine K. Iannarelli This user has declared a connection. (COI declared on Janine K. Iannarelli page and Sallyajozwiak talk page)

Sallyajozwiak (talk) 17:23, 28 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

no Declined Your proposal is insufficiently paraphrased from the source material. Large amounts of your proposal are a word-for-word copy of the text taken from one of your sources. Additionally, text appears to have been taken from another source. All texts proposed here with a COI edit request must be sufficiently paraphrased in your own words. Kindly see WP:PARAPHRASE for more information about this requirement. When you are ready to proceed, please feel free to open a new request. Regards, Spintendo ᔦᔭ 19:25, 28 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Schneider, Andrew (February 1, 2011). "Bauer Business Focus: Janine Iannarelli". KUHF, Houston Public Radio.
  2. ^ "What You Need to Know Before Buying a Used Business Aircraft". Business Aviation Insider. January–February 2012.
  3. ^ "European Business Aviation Conference & Exhibition (EBACE)".
  4. ^ "Corporate Jet Investor Miami 2017".
  5. ^ "WAI Space City chapter homepage".
  6. ^ Denver, Beverly. "Women Who Empower". Houston Woman Magazine.
  7. ^ "The Biz Av Bloggers". AvBuyer.com.
  8. ^ "European Business Aviation Association (EBAA) Associate Members Advisory Council (AMAC)".
  9. ^ "European Business Aviation Association's (EBAA) Associate Members Advisory Council (AMAC) Sales & Acquisitions Committee chair appointment".
  10. ^ "Governor Abbott Names Presiding Officer And Appoints 10 To The Aerospace And Aviation Advisory Committee". Office of the Governor Greg Abbot. January 28, 2016.
  11. ^ "2011 Great Women of Texas". Ft. Worth Business Press. October 2011.
  12. ^ "Awestruck: Four self-made Texas stars with ample AWE•ttitude© show that Awe is your Wow factor, and Attitude is Everything in success". Women's Chamber of Commerce of Texas.
  13. ^ Capitani, Cindy (August 27, 2016). "Fair Lawn "Falcon Lady" Among Three Inducted At Teterboro Hall Of Fame". Ridgefield Park-Hasbrouck Heights Daily Voice.
  14. ^ "Business Jet Broker Janine Iannarelli Finalist for Texas Businesswoman of the Year". Texas Executive Women. September 23, 2016.
  15. ^ "Houston Business Journal 2017 Women Who Mean Business Honorees".
  16. ^ "Girlstart".
  17. ^ "Girlstart Houston Game Changers Women In STEM Honorees".
  18. ^ "John G. Iannarelli".
  19. ^ Pennino, Laura M. (June 2012). "Corporate Citizenship - Why business invests time, money, and energy for good causes". Change Magazine.
  20. ^ "Mercury Board of Directors".
  21. ^ Payne, Larry. "Interchange Show". KPFT Radio.
  22. ^ "Houston (TX) Police Department - Mounted Patrol Unit". The City of Houston.
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