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  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    a (citations to reliable sources):
    a(OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall: Hold for now.
    Pass/Fail:
    Comments:
  • Some residual issues from the first GA review:
  • Grammar mistakes in lead. The plot section is duplicated more than I'd expect in the lead. A general plot summary should be in the lead, at best. Check over WP:LEAD.
  • The plot section is obviously going to be very narrative, however I believe it needs some tightening up. Overall, give it a read through and ensure someone can follow its prose.
  • Just a note that there's no need to use a wikilink everytime a word comes up, eg United States. Use it on first instance.
  • As for refs, check over to ensure that the facts being cited are contained within the ref itself.
Overall I'll check back in a week to see if these minor issues are considered and fixed. If so we should be able to pass the article. Nja247 (talkcontribs) 13:18, 16 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Review closed. No notable edits made over the past twelve days to remedy outstanding issues. Nja247 (talkcontribs) 08:32, 28 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]