Talk:Jeff Heath

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Date	Process	Result
November 26, 2012	Good article nominee	Listed

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 22:49, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll give this article a review. Name popped up while reading Feller's biography, got interested in him, and lo and behold he's at GAN. Wizardman 22:50, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

"and 1945 (the 1945 game was cancelled due to travel limitations during the United States' involvement in World War II)." that's worth a mention, but i don't know if it's worth being in the lead.

Done

"and was offered scholarships to play football." a scholarship, unless he was offered one in baseball too, in which case it should be made clear.

Done

It might be helpful to add a link to Barnstorm (sports) somewhere in the 1938 offseason.

Done

"leading up to the 1943" up to 1943

Done

"In 1943 he became the second player born outside the U.S. to hit 100 home runs, and he surpassed George Selkirk with his 109th home run in 1945." would prefer a cite for this.

Found this but will keep looking.

" he were 23–32" who were

Done

"And the possibility that Robertson was better paid than Heath. " sentence fragment. Also, this paragraph definitely needs a cite, perhaps two.

Will look for sources.

"when it was turn" was his turn/their turn, not sure if Heath or the Browns are meant here.

Done

"the National League (NL) had acquired Heath" Move NL to the previous sentence, which links National League; then NL can just be put here.

Done

"Braves farm system but he never " comma after system,

Done

Guy reminds me of Albert Belle, good power but not the best person ever. Anyway, article's on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 01:50, 23 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Everything checks out now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 01:54, 26 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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