Talk:Jess Fishlock/GA1
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Reviewer: Kaiser matias (talk · contribs) 12:25, 26 April 2017 (UTC)
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- In the lead, note what league the Seattle Reign FC play in, and spell out what "FA WSL" is, or at least what the WSL refers to.
- In Early life, you have "at age 16" and "at age sixteen;" stick with one, I think MOS suggests spelling out under 20 but consistency is the key.
- Cardiff City LFC has no citations.
- First paragraph of the Bristol Academy section has no citation.
- After mentioning the National Women's Soccer League, give the abbreviation for it.
- "Fishlock received a controversial red card..." is there any reason for the controversy? If so you should add it, if not it may not be necessary to note that.
- The 8–6–8 record is given the note explaining they're wins and losses, whereas a previous mention of a team record did not. Again, try to maintain consistency with that and either have all records linked like that, just the first mention, or none.
- Any way to expand the coaching career section? This isn't an issue, just it would be good perhaps to include her record as a coach, or some detail like that, to make it a little more in depth.
- References: 9, 15, 18, 36, and 54 are all dead.
Once these are taken care of I'll give it another look, but should be good at that point.
- Great it looks good now. Kaiser matias (talk) 00:51, 29 April 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks for your help Kaiser matias. Much appreciated. Hmlarson (talk) 01:27, 29 April 2017 (UTC)