Talk:John Crakehall/GA1

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 13:19, 10 May 2022 (UTC)

• "If John was Elias' son" - I'm sure this is a variant spelling of Ellis, but it's probably best to stick with one spelling
  • Nope, just me typoing. Ealdgyth (talk) 16:34, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
• So they commemorated his death before he actually died?
  • I tried to clarify. No, I don't know why they did the commemoration on the 5th, when he died between 8-10 September. Ealdgyth (talk) 16:34, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
• "treasuerer" - is this a spelling error or a technical term?
  • I can spell, really! Ealdgyth (talk) 16:34, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
• "and eventually to civil war in 1264" - Piped link Second Barons' War here?
  • Linked, but not piped. Ealdgyth (talk) 16:34, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
• Is the "edi" at the end of the long citation for Jobson 2010 intentional and signifying something or an accidental inclusion?
  • Typo, removed. Ealdgyth (talk) 16:34, 10 May 2022 (UTC)

That's all from me. Hog Farm _Talk 15:42, 10 May 2022 (UTC)

I think I got all these? Ealdgyth (talk) 16:34, 10 May 2022 (UTC)