Talk:John Halifax, Gentleman (1910 film)

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Review: June 23, 2015. (Reviewed version).

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A note

While technically a form of "OR" - I have found the original advertisement for John Halifax, Gentleman and added it to the article. The film still is the very same one as used in the Jonathan Silent Film collection which identifies Violet Heming and only notes the possibility that it is this film. I've submitted the information to the library along with several others. I trust there will be no issues given the trivial nature of this. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 15:32, 11 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:John Halifax, Gentleman (1910 film)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:10, 21 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Nearly done with this sweep JAGUAR 18:10, 21 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Checking against the GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
I would recommend splitting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced, per WP:LEAD

Nothing on the Production in the lead, despite the section being scarce the lead must summarise, even if it's minor

The plot summary in the lead is quite extensive

Is the list of people in the production sentence a definite list of people who worked on the film? The lead says otherwise

The names in the Cast section are not in the lead

"and stars Martin Faust as the John Halifax" - mistake here

" he and Fletcher's invalid son" - what is invalid meaning?
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
The assertions regarding the cameramen could be original research, but both candidates are included in the reference given.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Well researched and well written, once again. Nothing major so it can be put on hold. I am passing this on the grounds of good research. I had to correct a mistake myself JAGUAR 18:47, 23 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]