Talk:John Hemmingham

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April 6, 2013	Good article nominee	Listed

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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that John Hemmingham was banned from Sheffield United's Bramall Lane stadium because of concerns that playing music might structurally damage the stands?

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 06:37, 6 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Need some work, especially with the lead.

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The lead should have some content from every section. Done
"first started in football governance" - needs some copy-edit. Done
"independent supporters group" -> "an independent supporters group" Done
There is hardly any information about his personal life. Done
No ref has been provided for his birthday.
Was already in one of the external links but added as a ref. Done
The refs should not be written in all caps even if it is done in the source. Done
Try to see if you can get any free-licensed image.
I have searched for one but unfortunately I can't find one.

Will try to locate any other possible error. Anyhow the article seems to be good with lead being the only major problem. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^Talk ^Email 06:37, 6 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I've responded to your concerns. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 07:29, 6 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Some more comments

There is no source for birth-place in the infobox. Done
No source for his other name "hema" in the infobox.. Done ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^Talk ^Email 07:38, 6 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done those. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 07:49, 6 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Article passed ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^Talk ^Email 07:54, 6 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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