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GA Review

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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 03:55, 25 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be reviewing this article for potential GA status. My review will be posted when it's morning where I am. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 03:55, 25 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've decided to pass this article as GA - congrats! Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 14:19, 25 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Writing and formatting

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  • The sentence about his marriage might fit better at the end of the first paragraph under "Early life"
  • "from 1921–1923" -> "from 1921 until 1923"
  • Magor or Mahor?

Accuracy and verifiability

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  • Note 1 cites Evans and Miller, but the reference cites Elliott and Miller - which is correct?
  • Combine identical refs, ex. 5 and 10
  • In the last three entries of "Works cited", why is the middle Toronto not linked while the other two are?

Broad

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  • Do we know anything else about his children and his later life?

Neutrality

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No issues noted

Stability

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No issues noted

Images

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  • John Hugill.jpg - source link "expired"