Talk:John L. McKenzie

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Cleanup[edit]

This article is in need of serious cleanup. The first half of the article reads like a eulogy of McKenzie, using phrases like 'born into Eternal Life', and the second half appears to be a sort of anthology of McKenzie's writings. I will try to abridge the 'Quotes' section as time permits, and perhaps someone with a better knowledge of McKenzie could try to rewrite the biographical section. 99.99.28.50 (talk) 22:15, 28 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I agree. This article was probably written by a devoted Catholic admirer of McKenzie, not a neutral party! The many quotes focus on nonviolence--need to be trimmed too.Lmlmss44 (talk) 00:15, 14 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]