Talk:Jonathan Sánchez

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DateProcessResult
December 22, 2010Good article nomineeListed

Spelling of last name in title of article[edit]

Please correct the spelling so that there is an accent on the a. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.122.93.106 (talkcontribs)

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Secret account 15:40, 20 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Article needs some work before becoming an GA.

  • The lead needs to be expanded a little bit, give the seasons a bit more detail, and his playing style.
  • A subsection needs to be included about his playing style (only explains it's pitch repertoire), it's not that hard to find considering he's a starting pitcher.
  • enjoyed a fine start... tone, NPOV
  • After such an impressive performance... again tone
  • His performance went relatively unnoticed - I think it should be reworded, rookies who had one at-bat or pitched one inning that aren't a state of the art prospect goes relatively unnoticed.
  • It explains twice that it was his first Major League win, and it should be explained how the Giants won
  • Many of the sources cite San Francisco Giants when in fact those are mlb.com news stories correct them.
  • very well... tone
  • The word unfortunately a couple of times - reword, that's not proper encyclopedia language
  • for the first time in his career... unneeded wording since he became mostly a regular that season
  • His last start before going on the disabled list wasn't bad, though - personal opinion
  • Sánchez began having a career year - reword 7-6 record isn't a "career year"
  • Source doesn't mention a son

Ok good enough passed Secret account 16:34, 22 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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