Talk:Jordan Slew
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:30, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
Comments
- "A product of..." not sure how global this is really, maybe just be more basic.
- Reworded. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- Shouldn't 86th minute be hyphenated?
- Done. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- "Slew then signed his.." no need to repeat surname here, perhaps "He then signed..
- Changed. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- professional debut happened before professional contract. That's confusing to some of the non-expert readers.
- Changed to 'first-team debut'. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- "late substitute " hyphenate.
- Done. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- "He made eight appearances in total for the club" infobox says 11, but then there could be some confusion with when the transfer window took place.
- He signed for Blackburn at the end of the window so played all the league games in august for United. I've added in a bit more info to clarify. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- Consider linking "leg" for non-experts.
- Done. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- "By May 2011, a number of Premier League and Championship teams had enquired about acquiring Slew's services, with United turning down a £500,000 offer from Fulham.[14][15][16][17]" four refs? Why?
- An over enthusiastic editor - I've cut them back to two. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- Link Bramall Lane.
- Done. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- Don't overlink Manchester United.
- One links to their academy team for the youth FA cup and one to the parent club for the league appearance. Not sure what else I can do about that? Open to suggestions? Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- Perhaps make it clearer (i.e. less Easter egg-like) and explicitly mention the Academy...? The Rambling Man (talk) 16:28, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
- Good call - done. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 20:05, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
- Perhaps make it clearer (i.e. less Easter egg-like) and explicitly mention the Academy...? The Rambling Man (talk) 16:28, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
- One links to their academy team for the youth FA cup and one to the parent club for the league appearance. Not sure what else I can do about that? Open to suggestions? Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- "Slew signed for Premier League side Blackburn Rovers on transfer deadline day, Blackburn paying a fee of £1.1 million for the player,[4][20] and Slew signing a four-year" yuck. Rephrase. Don't repeat Slew, no need, and try not to have such a mammoth sentence.
- Split it out and revised. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- "a deail to" typo.
- Fixed. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- I don't think you need to relink things in every section (e.g. Championship).
- I was under the impression you should link on fist instance within sections (as someone jumping straight to that section, particularly on mobile, won't have seen a link earlier n the text) although this seems to be a moot point so have removed as advised. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- Fair point for mobile browsing, I hadn't even thought of that. Sorry to waste your time on this point, if you want to put the links back, that's just fine. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:28, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
- As I said, it's a moot point and MOS needs clarifying so I'm fine to go with your view mate. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 20:05, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
- Fair point for mobile browsing, I hadn't even thought of that. Sorry to waste your time on this point, if you want to put the links back, that's just fine. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:28, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
- I was under the impression you should link on fist instance within sections (as someone jumping straight to that section, particularly on mobile, won't have seen a link earlier n the text) although this seems to be a moot point so have removed as advised. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
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On hold, pending the comments above. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:49, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
- Hi - I'm a bit busy with work at the moment - will work on this over the course of the next week or so. Thanks Bladeboy1889 (talk) 20:18, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
- No problem. Ping me in a week or so. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:19, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
- Done it in my lunch break. One small query - see notes inline above. Thanks. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- Responded above, nearly there. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:28, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
- Done it in my lunch break. One small query - see notes inline above. Thanks. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
- No problem. Ping me in a week or so. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:19, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
All good, well done. The Rambling Man (talk) 12:02, 5 July 2013 (UTC)
Radcliffe Borough appearances
[edit]Just to demonstrate Slew only made those 2 appearances, here are the other line-ups from the remaining Radcliffe games in 2017-18 (which don't feature Slew):
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