Talk:Jordan Williams (linebacker, born 1993)

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:52, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]


Will look at this article. Comments will be coming soon. MWright96 (talk) 20:52, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead[edit]

  • "Williams played in 44 games, starting 21," - Williams played in 44 games, of which he started 21,  Done
  • Wikilink sacks to Quarterback sack  Done
  • Do the same to practice squad  Done

Early years[edit]

  • Fix the redirect links to middle linebacker to Linebacker#Middle linebacker and nose tackle to Defensive tackle#Nose tackle  Done
  • "His junior year," - During his junior year,  Done
  • "His senior season in 2010, he played at defensive end" - this piece of text should read as In Williams' senior season in 2010, he played at defensive end  Done
  • "He committed to Tennessee in October 2010." - spell this out a bit more: He committed to play college football for Tennessee in October 2010.  Done

College career[edit]

  • Add the appropriate wikilinks to sacks and pass breakups  Done
  • "He appeared in ten games, with five starts," - reword to Williams appeared in ten games, of which he started in half of them,  Done
  • "Williams played in 44 games, starting 21, during his college career." - Throughout his college career, Williams played in 44 games and started 21 of them.  Done

New York Jets[edit]

  • "He was released by the Jets on September 5 and signed to the team's practice squad on September 6, 2015." - change the text highlighted in bold so it reads the following day  Done

Miami Dolphins[edit]

  • "He was released by the Dolphins on December 26 and signed to the team's practice squad 'on December 29, 2015." - three days later  Done
  • "He was released by the team on September 3 and signed to the Dolphins' practice squad on September 4, 2016." - the next day  Done

Personal life[edit]

  • "Jordan's sister, Janine" - please don't use Jordan  Done
  • "Jordan held the first annual Jordan Williams Skills Camp on July 14, 2016." - same issue as above  Done

That's everything I could find in my reading of this article. On hold until all the queries have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 07:18, 21 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Done. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:49, 22 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@WikiOriginal-9: Okay then. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:56, 23 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the review. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:58, 23 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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