Talk:José Luis Chilavert/GA1
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Reviewer: Zwerg Nase (talk · contribs) 10:37, 9 July 2015 (UTC)
I will do this review. Zwerg Nase (talk) 10:37, 9 July 2015 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
This article has multiple issues:
- There are several dead links in the references, see here.
- There are several issues with WP:REPEATLINK.
- The lead is repetitive. Since most statements given about him in the lead are not likely to be challenged, there is no need for so many references at this point.
- Many references lead to sources that are not considered WP:RELIABLE, such as #7, #10, #29, to name a few.
- A lot of statements are unsourced, I placed [citation needed] templates here and there. Given the large number of dead links and unsourced statement, the informations in this article are practically non-verifiable.
- Scope: The club career section is way too short, while the international career section is overly long in comparison. I am therefore failing 3a and b.
- The header Leadership and morality does not seem NPOV to me. The section also lacks encyclopedic tone.
- Quotes: That's what Wikiquote is for.
- The tables in the statistics section are a mess. Missing borders, sources all over the place. This is not in compliance with Wikipedia's Manual of Style.
- Honours: Completely unsourced.
- Several references are just links, with no other information given (author, publisher, date etc.).
- The captions to the images should not have full stops, since they are not complete sentences, see WP:CAPTION.
As you can see, I had to fail several of the aspects of the GA criteria. Given the large number of problems this article has, I am failing this nomination without putting it on hold, since I do not believe the issues can be dealt with in the usual time frame of seven days. Feel free to improve the article and re-nominate it once it is done. Cheers, Zwerg Nase (talk) 11:09, 9 July 2015 (UTC)