Talk:Joseph Heleluhe

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A fact from Joseph Heleluhe appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 28 November 2016 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that during the 1895 counter-revolution, Joseph Heleluhe, private secretary to Hawaii's deposed queen Liliuokalani, was "stripped of all clothing and placed in a dark cell without light, food or water"?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2016/November. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Joseph Heleluhe.

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 02:52, 24 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:52, 24 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Prose Suggestions[edit]

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

Suggest expanding lead, if possible.
His father was possibly the same individual as J. H. Heleluhe, suggest:
- His father may have been the same J. H. Heleluhe,
He attended the local schools in the Puna district and later studied at the Hilo Boarding School under American missionary David Belden Lyman. does this mean he did elementary through high school, or the Hawaiian equivalent? If so I'd suggest:
- He completed his secondary education at the local schools in the Puna district and later studied at the Hilo Boarding School under American missionary David Belden Lyman
In 1892. Heleluhe was nominated as a National Reform Party candidate for the House of Representatives for Oʻahu's first ward. He lost this election. suggest:
- In 1892, Heleluhe was nominated as a National Reform Party candidate for the House of Representatives for Oʻahu's first ward, however he lost the election.

@KAVEBEAR: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 13:58, 5 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

First locomobile[edit]

https://sites.google.com/a/hawaii.edu/ndnp-hawaii/Home/historical-feature-articles/locomobiles

KAVEBEAR (talk) 02:49, 3 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]