Talk:Joseph Hobson/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 22:04, 1 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Happy to review this one.

~~Link Great Western Railway (there’s a choice, I’m not sure which one you need).~~
Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:32, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Done - Expanded lead further. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:55, 3 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
~~I don’t think it’s a problem for this article, but just to say that image is clearly copyright, but the source cannot be verified.~~
Done Replaced with 1909 public domain image, with link --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:32, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

~~...for a provincial land surveyor. - needs to be copy edited to improve the prose.~~
Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:37, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Link Wellington, Grey and Bruce Railway; International Railway Bridge (in the text and in the caption); electric trains (Electric locomotive).
Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:05, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

(not done)

(not done)

~~...onsite resident engineer… - wouldn’t either onsite or resident be redundant here?~~
Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:05, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

~~There are two many images of the tunnel in the gallery. As the topic is about Hobson and not the St Clair tunnel, I would only use one.~~
Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:05, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

~~Hobson was a member of the Canadian and American Societies of Civil Engineers and a member of the Institution of Civil Engineers of London, England. - is the wrong section.~~
Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:12, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

~~He also was a member in the Caledon Mountain Trout Club. is not noteworthy, and needs to be edited out.~~
Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:12, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

~~...when 84 years old. - amend to ‘...at the age of 84.’ to improve the prose.~~
Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:12, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

~~I would expect there to be more biographical details, which may be available from Irwin or elsewhere. If I find any, I'll pass them on.~~
Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:12, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

(not done)

~~The url to Ref 5 (Cook) is unnecessary, as it doesn't give access to the text.~~
Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:02, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

On hold for a week until 10 October to allow time to address the issues. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 18:15, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Amitchell125: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:09, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

A few points still outstanding; thanks for your work so far. Amitchell125 (talk) 07:07, 3 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Amitchell125: All further issues addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 15:01, 3 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Looks fine now. Article passed, well done. Amitchell125 (talk) 15:14, 3 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]