Talk:Juncus dichotomus
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peer review[edit]
on the wiki edu thing we are supposed to review each other's sandbox so I will give you a link to mine because I basicly done with it and I will put yours on my watchlist for when you do yours. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Simspartan/sandbox --Simspartan (talk) 01:27, 3 November 2016 (UTC)
The beginning of plant species pages usually start like this
Juncus dichotomus (forked rush) or Juncus dichotomus commonly known as forked rush
"its sister species" which is?
"could actually be more widespread" than what? remove 'more'
"occupies similar...habitats" to what? remove 'similar'
" is a graminoid, grass or grass-like plant, including" this makes it sound like the families are a lower taxa than the species
"linked with many differnet names" differnet --> different you misspelled it
"grow in seemingly tight groups. July through August is when" this sentence change is "harsh" try re-wording the second sentence
"J. dichotomus Elliott belongs, is readily distinguished " 'belongs' seems out of place
"Juncus dichotomus is a more specialised species and more confined to" more than? try removing the 'more'
one of your links was a redirect that times out after a while use this link instead--> http://www.academia.edu/download/43555528/floraoffireisland.pdf also here is DOI: 10.2307/2996816 so cite[1]
just so you know, you can add links to other wiki pages. I would suggest linking any time you say a taxa, place, or object.
I am sorry if this appears really harsh, critical, or nit-pick.
--Simspartan (talk) 02:39, 10 November 2016 (UTC)
References
- ^ Dowhan, Joseph J.; Rozsa, Ron (July 1989). "Flora of Fire Island, Suffolk County, New York". Bulletin of the Torrey Botanical Club. 116 (3): 265. doi:10.2307/2996816.