Talk:Just the Way You Are (Bruno Mars song)/GA1

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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 00:39, 15 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • There are a handful of issues with the external links according to the toolbox on the right.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 08:23, 15 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • A couple still remain.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 00:00, 18 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
      • Could you explain to me what does this means in some of the links? "Changes domain" and how to fix it? Thank you MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 01:39, 18 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
        • The ones that say changes domain are fine. The only one that continues to be a problem is the romanialibera.ro domain link. It seems to be redirecting as if the link was not evergreened and is now dead.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:15, 18 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
          • I repleaced the link by a new one with the same info. Please take a look, I believe all the problems with links are now fixed. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:58, 18 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
WP:LEAD

--I don't understand when you mean "link the billboard charts" can you show me an example? Same goes for Radio 1. No cover have charted. I don't believe is such a thing regarding the list of "best selling digital singles of all time" MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:32, 15 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Writing and production
Can you tell me what's wrong with A&R?
I don't know what A&R is? Please clarify.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 01:05, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Artists and repertoire (A&R) is the division of a record label or music publishing company that is responsible for talent scouting and overseeing the artistic development of recording artists and/or songwriters. It also acts as a liaison between artists and the record label or publishing company; every activity involving artists to the point of album release is generally considered under the purview of, and responsibility of, A&R." - wiki. I have put a disambiguation link to the definition. Ok I will find more two or three that I have seen. I ahve moved the version by Pierce the Veil including the single infobox but I don't think it's important the infobox and it also ruins the article so we could delete it. What's your opinion?MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 02:06, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
You linked it to the second use. I moved the link to the first use. Even linked it does not provide context. Please re-evaluate and consider how to clear this up. Maybe add a word or two. Is an A&R a type of representative?--03:54, 17 December 2013 (UTC)
I cleared up a bit in order to give a little definition of what the A&R have done in the process of developing this song.MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:06, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Can you move the clarification to the first use of the term.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 16:16, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Done.MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:38, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Is Aaron Bay-Schuck a person or a company. If it is a person, change which to who.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:00, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Done MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:10, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Release
Composition and lyrical interpretation
I believe they have all are inside quotes.MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:26, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
What about instrumentation and vocal range?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 16:24, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I thought that terms inside quotes were only those refering to reviews of the song. I guess you are right, all done I believe. Thank you for the tips. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:32, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I don't understand what you just said and I don't understand your response to the two terms I mentioned above.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:03, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I was saying that I didn't no I had to quote the instrumentation and vocal range. I only thought it was the reviews of the song describing it. Everything it's quoted. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:38, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
That was not what I meant. In general we don't use wikilinks on words inside quotes. However, neither of these was in quotes. I was wondering if there are wikilinks.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 00:05, 18 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, I get it now. Sorry but I never did something like this before so some terms are new to me and I might missintrepert some vocabulary. Now it's correct, please check it. Thank You MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:57, 18 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
It does not appear that either is linked right now. Could you further clarify what you have linked to address this concern.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 00:53, 22 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Both remain unlinked. What am I suppose to check?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 01:08, 18 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I thought that you meant that you didn't want wikilinks there. I have provided a wikilink for everything meaningful that is out of quote. Please take a look MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:28, 18 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I was asking if you feel you should link instrumentation and vocal range?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:22, 20 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, most of the articles including GA and FA. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:36, 20 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I don't understand your response. what are you waiting on?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 00:52, 21 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I have linked instumentation and vocal range(relevant wikilinks regarding the composition of the song). I was just saying that the majority of FA and GA articles have wikilinks on that section.MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:19, 21 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Reception and accolades
Commercial performance
I provided a link and clear up the setence MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:06, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Development and synopsis
Live performances
Track listing
All of the versions have been described.MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:26, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Chart precession and succession
Pierce the Veil version
References
General
Images
I'm not 100% sure what do you want me to improve in the File:Bruno Mars - Just the way you are video.jpg coud you explain it differently? Thank You MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:50, 18 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • I am putting this On Hold. I will monitor progress and review this after 7 days.
I have improved what you asked until the Track Listening section, could you take a look? Thank You.Also the "Chart precession and succession" section is organized by dates, when the single first reached number one. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:24, 16 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I have another show on the live performances. How many are needed? I have added some text to the Track Listening it is that what you are looking for? I have replaced some of the dead links, also.
Add all the live performances you can document.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 01:05, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I'll look at the Track listing prose when I get a chance.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 01:05, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Updated status[edit]

I will try to improve it. Done, it's near to impossible to find a source describing that.MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:32, 28 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for not responding. I believe that should be removed since there is no information regarding charts and sales info. Should I nominated it again? It took a long time for a 2nd opinion on that grammy sculpture. Thank you MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:32, 28 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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