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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 01:24, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 01:24, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sources are reliable, though I'm unable to assess one of the Indonesian sources; I'm taking that one on faith.

  • Added the URAA tag.
  • Not really an issue for GA, which only requires that the prose be clear, but you use "also" a lot in the second and third paragraphs of "Minister of Finance". Most, or perhaps all, could be deleted.
  • Removed 3 of them. I left in those that just sounds right.

-- I fixed some copyediting issues rather than list them here. The prose has some occasional issues but it's good enough for GA. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 01:55, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Mike Christie: Addressed. Juxlos (talk) 03:59, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 12:47, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]