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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 20:11, 15 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 20:11, 15 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The logo has an appropriate FUR, and the other two images are appropriately licensed.

  • The first paragraph of "15 years of fighting" is confusing. I had a look at the source for [2], and realized that the issue was that Gross had simultaneously agreed to sell to two different parties. I think this could be clearer.
    • Added a clearer mention of this.
  • "Gross had trafficked in the permit". What is "trafficking"? It appears to be a legal term with a specialised definition here.
    • I've attempted to explain.
  • Do we know what Christian Communications' complaint was?
    • I think they just wanted the station.
  • "What had changed was an offer by the McKinnons to provide financial support": what does this mean? The McKinnons were willing to loan the money to USIU?
    • Yes. Clarified by noting "financial support to USIU"
  • "The renamed KUSI-TV finally signed on September 13, 1982": should this be "signed on on"?
  • "When the sale collapsed": does this refer to McKinnon's attempt to purchase the shares from USIU, or to USIU's attempt to sell to ABRY?
    • ABRY. Clarified.
  • Are there any updates re the Maas litigation?
    • Found one. Trial has been continually delayed but will be December 2.

-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 20:59, 15 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Pinging Mike Christie after reviewing all of the copy issues. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 21:52, 15 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

All but one struck; one question left above. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 22:00, 15 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Now passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 00:23, 16 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]