Talk:Kaddish (The X-Files)

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GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:31, 1 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this soon. A quick look looks good, good work!

Infobox

Where is the production code referenced?
The DVD case. I haven't added it because I don't think its necessary.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Where is running time referenced?
Umm... the actual episode.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Guest actors: Tony should be Tony Oliver
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lede

Link science fiction to science fiction on television
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"producer" is he a "producer" for the series
I don't understand what you are asking here.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
The episode aired in the United States on February 16, 1997 on the Fox → The episode originally aired on the Fox network on February 16, 1997
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
The episode received a Nielsen rating was viewed by 16.56 million viewers → The episode earned a Nielsen rating, being watched by 16.56 million viewers in its intital broadcast
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"television critics" television is repetitive
Umm, weren't you the one who has always told me to change this.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah, it doesn't really matter which is used, so whichever should be fine. TBran dl ey 21:38, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Add actors for the short plot summary in the lead
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Link Vancouver
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"out their space for the episode.," why is there a period, then a comma, then a new word not in capitals
Fixed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Plot

Add actor for Isaac's
It's already there.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Add actor for Tony Oliver
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Add actors for various others
They're in there, if I could have found them. If not, I didn't add them.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Production

In the intro, it says that Gordon is the producer, but here, that is not mentioned
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Link The X-Files in "Writing"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Writing" seems to be about Gordon, not Manners
I just always add them there.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Justine Miceli was chosen to play the role of Ariel; she based her character's sorrowful demeanor on the memory of her own father's death due to cancer." citation/reference needed
All of that is sourced to the "prodbook2" citation. I bundled them near the end.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
In "Filming and music", link Vancouver
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Themes

Howard Gordon should be Gordon as it is already above once per WP:MOS
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Broadcast and reception

"Kaddish" was originally broadcast in the United States on the Fox network on February 16, 1997 → "Kaddish" originally aired on the Fox network on February 16, 1997
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
X from X, consider making a re-write for some. Example: "Writing for X, X"
That's only in two, but I changed on to "of"--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

References

Ref. 3: Fox Broadcasting Company should be linked there rather than "corporation"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ref. 12: Is missing publisher (Dennis Publishing)
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ref. 12: Curly quote should be a regular quote after The X-Files on the reference
Ref. 14: Cinefantastique is already linked, so unlink now
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

External links

"The X-Files Wiki, an external wiki" is repetive say: "The X-Files, an external wiki" instead
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Great article, its fun to read. There are only a few issues to be fixed here. TBran dl ey 19:43, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I believe I've corrected or explained everything. Thanks for the review.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I'll pass the article. TBran dl ey 21:38, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]