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Reviewer: WikiRedactor (talk · contribs) 15:51, 28 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox
  • Could you apply a flat list to the producers' names like you have for the genres?
 Done
  • Will you add the two singles from the album into the infobox? (If there aren't specific dates to provide, the months/years alone will suffice.)
 Done
Introduction
  • I recommend removing the mention of contemporary Christian music before Katy's name, since it is mentioned only three sentences later in greater detail.
 Done
  • The audio cassette was also a physical release, so I would clarify that the CD version of the album was released a month later.
 Done
  • I would replace the word "extinct" with "defunct".
 Done
  • You can remove the 200 copies citation from the second paragraph, since it is already sourced in its section and I can't imagine that this fact is widely disputed.
 Done
  • Can we add a mention of how this is Katy's only contemporary Christian album before going mainstream? (If you can find a statement or something where she says why she changed, that might be interesting to add somewhere in the body, too.)
 Done though I couldn't find any statement by Katy that completely justifies the change.
Background and recording
  • IMDb is not considered a reliable source, and since you provided the book anyways, I'd remove that web citation altogether.
 Done
Composition
  • Is there a specific link you can find for the AllMusic reference?
 Done
  • Can you add the liner notes for Prism to cite the "Choose Your Battles" reference?
 Done
Release and promotion
  • You don't have to mention Amazon's mistake.
I do, actually... it is a common mistake in Perry's fanbase to believe the album was released on October. It's best to keep this.
Track listing
  • Can you please apply flat lists to all these parameters?
Not done...

I did some spot-checking along the way, and all the sources referenced what they were supposed to. Once these comments are addressed, I don't see anything that would keep me from promoting it. WikiRedactor (talk) 16:11, 28 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

All done, I think! Prism 17:30, 28 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Passing, congratulations! WikiRedactor (talk) 17:59, 28 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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