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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: ZKang123 (talk · contribs) 01:44, 15 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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This is a relatively short article. As such, I don't have many issues with this article. Just a couple of things:

  • Does this heritage railway have a station stop or something? Perhaps a mention of that would suffice, plus an image of the stop.
    There is a station, but I can't find any real coverage of it. You can actually see part of it in the photo in the infobox. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 17:47, 15 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Perhaps more details like tourist numbers? Reception of the heritage railway?
    I didn't find anything on passenger numbers, but I did find a bit of information that it was received positively by local residents, and I've added this to the article. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 17:47, 15 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Wish the lead could be fluffed up more, but given this is a short article, the lead seems fine.
    I've expanded the lead. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 17:47, 15 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any other notable incidents during its operations?
    I searched for anything on accidents, but I didn't find anything. Seems they've been running a safe railroad. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 17:47, 15 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

That's all for now.--ZKang123 (talk) 01:44, 15 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review, @ZKang123: I think I've responded to everything know. Let me know if you have any further comments. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 17:47, 15 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
No other outstanding problems I can find for this article. Issues raised are satisfactorily explained or addressed.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:18, 16 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]