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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:13, 13 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]


  • No DABs.
  • External links OK.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • Very well done, my only question is why why wasn't he still on the sick rolls after his release if he still had malaria?
  • A very trivial point, but you should probably standardize your ISBNs, either with or without dashes.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:13, 13 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks for the review Sturm, I have made the ISBNs consistent. RE the malaria, the only mention of it in my references is when he contracted it in Syria. He appears to have made a full recovery by the time of El Alamein. In the course of checking this, I found a couple of interesting tidbits not in the article and so have expanded on a couple of points. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 00:55, 14 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]