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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 06:46, 2 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will look at this article. MWright96 (talk) 06:46, 2 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Background

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  • "They have competed at most Summer Olympic Games since then" - get rid of then
  • "consisted of one cross-country skier, Philip Boit. Boit had also" - try not to have the sentences start and end like this
  • "As the only participant for Kenya, he was selected as" - try As his country's only participant, Boit was selected as

Cross-country skiing

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  • "scouted by American sportswear company Nike, Inc.," - think having just Nike will suffice here
  • "This ranked him 77th for the event, and only the top 60 were allowed to proceed to the second 10 kilometre freestyle portion of the event" - reptition of event
  • "Only the top 16 finishers were advanced to the quarterfinals" - remove were

Referneces

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  • Reference 7 is misssing Associated Press as the agency that provided the story to The Seattle Times

That all I have. Will put this review on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 07:23, 2 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]