Talk:King Worm/GA1
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 15:44, 9 January 2017 (UTC)
- I would avoid the repetition of the word “episode” in the first sentence of the third paragraph.
- Please add an ALT description for the image.
- I would add a brief sentence to the lead about the positive reviews for the episode to avoid giving undue weight to The A.V. Club review in the lead. It could be about how Klein and O’Keefe both praise the show’s use of dream/subconsciousness sequences.
- Would Tom Kenny count as a guest star for voicing Lady Rainicorn in the dream? If so, please add him to the Guest appearance(s) in the infobox. If not, then it is fine as it currently stands.
- Reference 17 needs to have the publisher (Screenrant) included.
@Gen. Quon: Great work with the article! I apologize for my review being so short, but I could not find that much wrong with this. Also, awesome use of the word “reverie”. Anyway, once my comments are addressed, this should be a quick and easy pass. Aoba47 (talk) 17:21, 9 January 2017 (UTC)