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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:31, 21 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Another! Many thanks again. Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:50, 21 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • "his Russian work" is Russian needed here?
    • Cut.
  • No reason for those two references in the lead, they can go into the main body if they're not already there.
    • Moved.
  • " a Privy Councillor" is there a reason this is capitalised?
    • l/c.
  • "famous scientists, publishing on anthropology" who was doing the **

publishing here, it's not clear.

    • Edited.
  • "to the paedophilia for" do you mean criminal acts of paedophilia?
    • Edited.
  • "classification of the diatoms based " overlinked.
    • Fixed.
  • "University, Tatarstan;" I would think that Tatarstan should go after the first mention of Kazan, not here.
    • Done.
  • " St. Petersburg" Saint Petersburg for consistency.
    • Fixed.
  • "strikingly" according to whom?
    • Glossed.
  • "to form chloroplasts.[14][12]" overlinked and ref order.
    • Fixed.
  • "sizeable lichen herbarium, containing" lichen overlinked.
    • Fixed.
  • "remains at Kazan University. It " overlinked.
    • Fixed.
  • "a mutualistic symbiosis between" overlinked.
    • Fixed.
  • "and indeed ridiculed" even rather than indeed.
    • Fixed.
  • JSTOR is in both italics and not italics in the refs.
    • Fixed.
  • Schimper is mentioned in the infobox but not in the article at all.
    • Added mention.
  • Likewise Wallin.
    • Added.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:54, 27 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]