Talk:Kyrgyzstan at the 2010 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: David Eppstein (talk · contribs) 00:20, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

1. Writing quality:

In the background section, the sentences "Following the Dissolution... Following recognition..." come off as unnecessarily repetitive. Simplest would just be to remove the "Following recognition" clause, as it doesn't really add any meaning to its sentence.
No MOS issues noted.

2. Sourcing:

All sources appear reliable, all sources are consistently formatted, and all claims appear properly sourced. Maybe it would be appropriate to link Sports Reference in the first one, to make clearer where the information comes from.
Earwig found no copyvio.

3. Coverage:

This article is short but appears to more-or-less cover the subject in its entirety, without too much extraneous detail.

4. Neutrality:

5. Stable:

6. Illustrations:

The flagbearer image is seriously underexposed but I guess we work with what we have.
Both it and the flag image are relevant and appear to be properly licensed.
The photo caption is neutrally worded and informative.
The flag image has no caption but I don't think it needs one; the addition of a caption would be too far off-topic and violate WP:ASTONISHME.

@Courcelles: Overall, this seems very close to GA quality. It just needs to fix the phrasing issue for criterion 1 and the source wikilink for criterion 2. —David Eppstein (talk) 00:33, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]