Talk:LW1 (classification)/GA1
GA Review
[edit]| GA toolbox |
|---|
| Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 17:18, 19 January 2013 (UTC) It should be a lot quicked process this time. -- Zanimum (talk) 17:18, 19 January 2013 (UTC)
No issues with sources, they're all quite reputable, some the definitive option. What does "the skier with cerebral palsy may tie more quickly" mean? Tie the poles on? (I've only cross-country skied once in my life, and never downhill skied, so if this is common skiing terminology, I'm unaware of it.) The only prose issue left is the last paragraph of technique, just have to read through that further. -- Zanimum (talk) 18:10, 19 January 2013 (UTC)
- A typo. It should have been "tire". Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:40, 19 January 2013 (UTC)
- Ah, that works much better, thanks. Haven't got to the remaining paragraph just yet, will do early this week. -- Zanimum (talk) 22:39, 20 January 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, so I've revised the Technique paragraph in question, to the point where it reads smoothly for me. That said, results may vary, there may be new missteps. Feel free to edit further, but I think the overall sentence structure is a bit smoother now. Anyway, pass. -- Zanimum (talk) 00:31, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you! Much appreciated. Hawkeye7 (talk) 00:50, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, so I've revised the Technique paragraph in question, to the point where it reads smoothly for me. That said, results may vary, there may be new missteps. Feel free to edit further, but I think the overall sentence structure is a bit smoother now. Anyway, pass. -- Zanimum (talk) 00:31, 25 January 2013 (UTC)