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"She made her in-ring debut on May 13, 2009, after having trained under Rocky Santana, Sadico, Judas el Traidor, Terrorista, Negro Navarro, Justiciero and Robin Maravilla prior to her debut." - try to reword the text in bold for the avoidance of repetition
"At some point prior to July 2014," - At an unknown date
"when not needed for CMLL shows." - when she was not needed
"all risk their masks in a Lucha de Apuestas, bet match." - don't think that the comma is needed here
"The 14-woman torneo cibernetico match where La Metálica was the second competitor eliminated." - saw La Metálica become the second wrestler eliminated.
"to become a double champion," - two-time
"She lost to Dalys in the finals two weeks later." - you mean Daly?
"Daly originally earned a CMLL World Women's Championship match against Marcela, but Marcela was injured." - try not to use Marcela's name too closely in the same sentence
Am placing the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the above responses. MWright96(talk) 19:57, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
MWright96 I have fixed all issues except one. two-time champion is wrong in this case, because she would hold both the Mexican National Women's Championship AND the CMLL World Women's Championship. Everything else has been addressed. MPJ-DK (talk) 21:41, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
b (citations to reliable sources): 