Talk:Lactarius argillaceifolius/GA1
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Reviewer: Ucucha 17:11, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this article. Ucucha 17:11, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- "The type specimens—collected by Smith from Oak Grove, Livingston County, Michigan, in July of 1972—is housed at the University of Michigan conservatum."—plural or singular? Also, is "conservatum" a word? It's not in the OED.
- "This related grouping of species,"—"This grouping of related species"? Or perhaps just "This grouping"
- "Lactarius argillaceifolius var. megacarpus has caps with dimensions from 14 to 27 cm (5.5 to 10.6 in) wide, with acrid-tasting flesh that is up to 3 cm (1.2 in) thick. The gill attachment is adnate"—no citation; looks like you left off in the middle of a sentence, perhaps to write the subsection on varieties a few paragraphs down.
Otherwise looking good—as usual. Ucucha 17:22, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for the fixes; I'm passing the article now. Ucucha 19:22, 8 June 2011 (UTC)