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Good articleLast Day in Florida has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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March 18, 2012Good article nomineeListed
November 7, 2012Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

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The episode was garbage. Always on Wiki I see this "the episode was generally viewed as positive", but then I talk to actual fans or read blogs and this season is getting trashed. Big disconnect. -JorgeK — Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.30.215.10 (talk) 17:42, 11 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]


It reads like a fluff-piece; ""Last Day in Florida" received positive reviews from critics, with some critics praising Wilson and Krasinski's performance." 'Praising Wilson and Krasinski'? That was some of the worst acting I've see on the office. The wrestling scene was embarrassing to watch. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 159.53.78.140 (talk) 17:10, 12 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Unfortunately, your opinions aren't what matters hear. If you can find reliable articles that "trash" the episode, post them. Blogs don't count. Personal opinions don't count. And unless you can't read, the harshest any episode this season has got is either a C- or 7/10 rating. That's hardly "trashing". I've seen episodes get one star reviews, 2 out 10, F's, etc. Just because it isn't being gushed on doesn't mean its getting ripped to pieces. The article states that it got mixed-to-positive. Please stop complaining and edit it if you can.--Gen. Quon (talk) 04:08, 17 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 04:05, 17 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Issues:

  • Intro: "Robert California (James Spader) reveals he hates Nellie's business plan, Jim (John Krasinski) swings into action to keep Dwight (Rainn Wilson) from getting fired." I would put an 'and' between 'plan' and 'Jim'
  • Intro: Mentioned the cookies plot
  • Plot: I think 'reverted' would fit better than 'returned' when talking about Stanley, but that's really just me
  • Watch contractins, like 'won't' and 'hasn't'
  • Production: You use the term 'the episode also marks the..." about three times. Cut this down and change up the wording so the prose doesn't get repetitive
  • References: Ref 5 needs writer and director info; Ref 16 needs publisher date

That's really all. Fix these up an I will pass the article. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 16:41, 17 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Everything has been fixed! I pass.--Gen. Quon (talk) 01:33, 18 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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