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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:10, 18 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:10, 18 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

I'll put the article on hold for a week, and once the issues are fixed I'll give it a second read-through. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:40, 18 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Changes look good, read-through two will be tomorrow. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:06, 23 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

One more thing: "Current Temple player Dalton Pepper was his high school teammate" Is there any way to make this not time-sensitive? I was going to suggest Fellow Temple player, but since Pepper's just transferring there now that's not accurate. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:25, 24 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'm actually not going to worry about that above comment since he'll be there for two years yet. As such I'll pass this article as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:39, 24 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]