Talk:Layakharo

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Is Ranikot Fort close enough to Layakharo that a photo belongs on the village page? From the coordinates in the article Layakharo is over 100km from Ranikot Fort. Andrew*Debbie (talk) 14:50, 16 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Tone Issues[edit]

I sympathize with the lack of wireless coverage in your village. I also live in an area with poor wireless internet access. A good internet connection is important. I also agree that a good education is important. However, these sections do not meet wikipedia style guidelines.

Wikipedia articles should be written in an encyclopaedic style.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Writing_better_articles#Tone

″ In prose writing, the first-person (I and we) point of view and second-person (you and your) point of view typically evoke a strong narrator. While this is acceptable in works of fiction, it is generally unsuitable in an encyclopedia, where the writer should be invisible to the reader.″

We, along with other wikipedia editors, should work together to improve this article.

Andrew*Debbie (talk) 09:07, 28 August 2015 (UTC) Andrew*Debbie[reply]

I found a possible reference for this demographics section. Pakistan Bureau of Statistics has census data for Tharkapar district, but the report is not free. http://www.pbs.gov.pk/sites/default/files/population_census/publicationdcr.pdf Perhaps someone on wikipedia already has the document and could check to see if it is of use here.