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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:19, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will review this one. MWright96 (talk) 18:19, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Background[edit]

  • "The Lebanese Olympic Committee was recognized by" - recognised

Alpine skiing[edit]

  • "the second of his four Olympic consecutive Olympic appearances." - remove the first mention of the word "Olympic" to avoid the unncessary reptition in that sentence
  • "which ranked him 57th out of 72 competitors who finished the race." - finishing competitors.
  • "with Othmar Schneider taking silver" - winning the silver
  • Maybe add the "scope=col" field to the columns in the data table per MOS:DTT?

References[edit]

  • The archive date in Reference 1 should be in the YYYY-MM-DD format to maintain consistency

Nice work on this article. Not too much work that needs to be undertaken. MWright96 (talk) 19:27, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]