Talk:Lemonade (Alexandra Stan song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 12:06, 3 July 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I'm MarioSoulTruthFan and I'll be reviewing this article over the course of the week. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:06, 3 July 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• Alt → Stan is portrayed posing (sounds terrible)
• Label → "This field should refer to the label on which the single/album was originally released". You have like 5 labels!!

Lead

• recorded by Romanian recording → recorded by Romanian singer and songwriter
• You should mention the release date in Japan since it was recorded for that re-issue album.
• You should state that was compared to Britney's hold it against me or even Lady Gaga
• Commercially, "Lemonade" was successful on several European record charts → Commercially, "Lemonade" was peaked on some European record charts
• with it being → becoming a
• by the Federation of the Italian Music Industry → by the Federation of the Italian Music Industry (FIMI)

Composition

• Move the sample here with and add a description.

 Fixed Moved sample.

• They → who?

Critical reception

• music critics → Link music journalism

Music video

• "Still" → Shot
• "Direct Lyrics later compared this outfit to gipsy culture" → remove "later"

Track listings

• Needs language parameter on the reference.

 Fixed Added language to each iTunes link.

Credits and personnel

• director → music video director. Is he really on the liner notes? Otherwise I would move it to the music video section.

 Fixed Removed the director's credit.

• Mastering, mixing, recording? Stan for sure didn't do all of these by herself?

Added info for recording, but I couldn't find anything on mastering and mixing. Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:12, 7 July 2016 (UTC)

Charts and certifications

Weekly charts

• Fine

Year-end charts

• The peak is not on the given citation.

 Fixed Oh sorry, the position was no 64.

Certifications

• Fine

Release history

• Make a small prose regarding the release here.

Reference

• YouTube → noitalic
• Link the first "iTunes Store"

External links

• Remove the music video from the infobox and add it here.

 Fixed Moved music video.

Categories

• 2012 songs → should be after the 2012 singles

Overall GA review

@Cartoon network freak: please hold until I comment on everything. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 10:56, 7 July 2016 (UTC)

• You need a commercial performance section! Have you forgot?

@Cartoon network freak: address the issues I have raised including the one above.

@MarioSoulTruthFan: All fixed; thanks for your review!! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:56, 7 July 2016 (UTC)