Talk:Leotia lubrica/GA1
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Reviewer: Sasata (talk) 16:24, 3 July 2011 (UTC)
I'll review these babies. Sasata (talk) 16:24, 3 July 2011 (UTC)
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"Olive-green in colour" I think it would be better to say it has an olive green tint, this conforms more to the field guide descriptions I've read, and jibes better with the color of the taxobox image"However, Christiaan Hendrik Persoon, basing his work on that of Scopoli" I'm not sure what this statement means- you could cite Persoon's 1794 work and give a link with this; Bulliard's Herbier de la France is here
I don't think the Persoon link is actually his publication that gave the description under the new name. It was published a few year's later than the mentioned in the book by Bi, and it cites an earlier work. The Bulliard link, though, is definitely worth including. However, how you go about citing a work like that, I don't know. Does what I've done work? J Milburn (talk) 10:21, 4 July 2011 (UTC)
link valid to correct name (botany)publisher for Species Fungorum is CAB Internationalit's stem in the lead, but stalk in the description- Done. I've gone with stalk; I want to stress how this isn't a "mushroom", as such.
"with Charles McIlvaine even consider it good." fixthe single image doesn't do it justice; could you possible fit in a group shot-there's lots of nice ones to choose from at MO. You could perhaps remove the micro characteristics subheader and fit it in left-side in the description. If the article is expanded a couple of paragraphs from the two sources below there should be ample room :)Additional sources and info: JSTOR 2467537, doi:10.1007/s11557-006-0094-8McKnight's field guide calls it a "slippery cap". Should also mention (same source): the stem surface is "scurfy" (or jargon-free equivalent)—this is apparent in the image if you look at full magnification; the spores are hyalinethe stalk is "hollow, or more often filled with a gel"; "It is the most common Leotia in North America"[1]more common names: "green slime fungus", "gumdrop fungus". Also found in New Zealand.<ref name=Dickinson1982>Dickinson C, Lucas J. (1982). VNR Color Dictionary of Mushrooms. New York, New York: Van Nostrand Reinhold. pp. 16–17. ISBN 978-0442219987.</ref>one source suggests that the greenish color of L. atrovirens may be due to infection by an imperfect fungus on L. lubrica,[2]Arora says the species may intergrade;[1]the Zhong and Pfister paper mentioned above should shed more light on their relationshipanother name: "ochre jelly club". This source calls it edible but bland.[3]
Refs
- ^ a b Arora D. (1986). Mushrooms Demystified: a Comprehensive Guide to the Fleshy Fungi. Berkeley, California: Ten Speed Press. p. 874. ISBN 0-89815-169-4.
- ^ Kibby G. (1994). An Illustrated Guide to Mushrooms and Other Fungi of North America. Stamford, Connecticut: Lubrecht & Cramer Ltd. p. 178. ISBN 0-681-45384-2.
- ^ Sundberg W, Bessette A. (1987). Mushrooms: A Quick Reference Guide to Mushrooms of North America (Macmillan Field Guides). New York: Collier Books. p. 14. ISBN 0-02-063690-3.
Ok, I think I've dealt with everything, and I've expanded the lead. Thanks for your thorough review- I'd be happy to look into any other issues. J Milburn (talk) 19:19, 5 July 2011 (UTC)