Talk:Let Your Head Go/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:48, 26 August 2023 (UTC)

This will run over two days! --K. Peake 17:48, 26 August 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Infobox and lead

• Pipe electro to Electro (music) in the infobox
• "also serving as additional producers." → "also serving as producers." to avoid the implication they contributed additional production role
• "In 2004, it was included on the video album" → "In 2004, the former was included on the video album,"
• "after her record company went" → "after Beckham's record company went"
• "It is Beckham's" → "The song is Beckham's"
• ""Let Your Head Go" is a" → "It is a"
• Pipe electro to Electro (music)
• "by Beckham in the United Kingdom," → "by Beckham in the UK,"
• Sophie Ellis Bextor → Sophie Ellis-Bextor with the wikilink

Background

• Where is the second solo album sourced?
• A more accurate description than describing her solo career as a failure would be rapping career/style per the source

Composition

• "also serving as additional producers." → "also serving as producers."
• Remove overly obvious wikilink on guitar
• Pipe mastered to Mastering (audio)
• Add info about the meaning of the song to the second para

I'm not sure what you mean here Alex ^{reach me!} 22:32, 27 August 2023 (UTC)

• ""Let Your Head Go" is a" → "Musically, "Let Your Head Go" is a" but the last genre is not sourced
• Pipe electro to Electro (music)
• Wikilink Racked per MOS:LINK2SECT
• "and vintage Cyndi Lauper."" → "and vintage Cyndi Lauper"." per MOS:QUOTE
• "just a few years prior."" → "just a few years prior"." per above
• "feel, boasting "boasted a tune" → "feel and "boasted a tune"

Reception

• Sophie Ellis Bextor → Sophie Ellis-Bextor on the img text with the wikilink
• "received positive reviews from" → "was met with positive reviews from"
• "Andy White, the song is" → "White, the song is" per his full name already having been used (The Independent is sufficient to identify which person of this surname he is)
• "For Jon O'Brien of" → "For O'Brien of"
• "Justin Myers from the Official Charts Company" → "Myers from the Official Charts Company"
• Use the staff of introduction for Hollywood.com
• "of her vocal proficiency."" → "of her vocal proficiency"." per MOS:QUOTE
• "In the United Kingdom," → "In the UK,"
• "with Sophie Ellis Bextor's" → "with Sophie Ellis-Bextor's" with the wikilink
• Pipe Eurochart Hot 100 Singles to European Hot 100 Singles

Music video

• Pipe wire hanger to Clothes hanger
• "She wakes from" → "Beckham wakes from"
• "She walks between" → "Beckham walks between"
• MOS:QUOTE issues in the last para and repeated instances of full names when these have already been used

Track listings

• Good

Credits and personnel

• Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel

Charts

• Wouldn't it be better to list the entries as "Let Your Head Go/This Groove"?

Weekly charts

• Pipe Romanian Top 100 to Romanian record charts

Year-end charts

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks great at 25.2%!!!
• Wikilink Omnibus Press on ref 5
• Wikilink Telstar Records on ref 11
• Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on ref 13
• Wikilink Racked to itself on ref 15 per MOS:LINK2SECT
• Wikilink Hollywood.com on ref 18
• Pipe The Belfast News Letter to News Letter on ref 23

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this went as expected! --K. Peake 20:45, 27 August 2023 (UTC)

Kyle Peake Thanks for another amazing review! See my comment above. Alex ^{reach me!} 22:32, 27 August 2023 (UTC)

By meaning of the song, I mean an analysis of sorts for the lyrical meaning please. K. Peake 07:26, 28 August 2023 (UTC)

Kyle Peake I'm afraid there's no info on this other than the David Sinclair book one. Alex ^{reach me!} 03:23, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake: Is there any updates for this review? Is there more things to be sorted, or are we done? — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 01:00, 26 October 2023 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, I did some copy editing for you but this is ready to go! --K. Peake 06:46, 26 October 2023 (UTC)