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  • What exactly is a "Hindu soundtrack"?
I'm sorry? There seems to be no mention of "Hindu soundtrack" in the article. ~*~AnkitBhatt~*~ 17:50, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "pivotal roles" sounds rather awkward; why not "main roles"?
 Done Made it "lead roles".
  • "Ra.One premiered in three cities across the world" - I think "across the world" is redundant, especially if you wrote in three cities and then list them
 Done Removed
  • "nett revenue" should be "net revenue"
 Done Removed from text.
  • "sustain " sounds for me too emotional
 Done Re-phrased.
  • Be consistent whether you include the 0 ahead single numbers in dates

Overall I think it is ready for FLC. I am not a native English speaker, so I can't say exactly how the prose is. My impression of the prose was overall fine. Regards.--GoPTCN 17:34, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for this review. I would also request you to take a look at the FAC of the parent article. Regards, ~*~AnkitBhatt~*~ 17:50, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]