Talk:Little Fishing Creek/GA2
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 17:06, 03 April 2016 (UTC)
Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.
Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 17:06, 03 April 2016 (UTC)
Infobox[edit]
- Looks good; I usually have to add suggestions for the infobox!
Lead[edit]
Paragraph 1[edit]
- You used "in" three times in the first sentence; could you replace with different words to end any repetition?
Paragraph 2[edit]
- What is the Greenwood Valley? You mention it, but in the way it sounds like the reader should already know what that is
- Please provide a link for "Pennsylvania Route 42"
- Done.
- Again, you used "in" three times in the third to last sentence; anyway to replace these words?
- Done.
Paragraph 3[edit]
- What is an "Exceptional Value Stream"?
- Plus, should "Exceptional Value Stream" be in all CAPS?
- Reword the last sentence to be "Little Fishing Creek contains parts that are suitable to canoe on." Does that sound any better?
- Reworded.
Course[edit]
Paragraph 1[edit]
- Nothing here; great work!
Paragraph 2[edit]
- There's no link for Columbia County here; care to add one?
- Okay.
Paragraph 3[edit]
- This is way too short; please just take it and add it to the previous paragraph
Tributaries[edit]
- You use "of" three times in this sentence couldn't "of the Little..." but switched into "on the Little..."? Let me know what you think...
- Reworded, but not in that way.
Hydrology[edit]
- The last two paragraphs (sentences) of this section should be added elsewhere because it looks like a list; WP is not a list
- Some paras merged, which is I guess what you're suggesting.
Geography and geology[edit]
- Once again, could some of the the statements in this section be added to other paragraphs? I'm sure they could
- Done.
- Otherwise, another good section! :)
Watershed[edit]
Paragraph 1[edit]
- The link for "quadrangle" should be used in its first mention; it is currently used in its second mention
Paragraph 2[edit]
- Reword to "The watershed of Little Fishing Creek is long compared to its width", removing "fairly"
- Reworded, but not in that way.
Paragraph 4[edit]
- Remove the link to "Pennsylvania Route 42"
- Done, but not sure exactly why.
- Remove the link to "Sullivan County"
- Likewise.
History, industries, and etymology[edit]
Paragraph 1[edit]
- "on August 2, 1979. Its identifier in the..." → "on August 2, 1979; its identifier in the..."
- Why? Neither sentence is overly short, and that makes it a one sentence paragraph, which is also frowned upon.
Paragraph 3[edit]
- Is the inclusion of the links for all of the bridges really necessary?
Biology[edit]
- Again, please try to combine some of the statements in this section because they are too short and look like part of a list
- Done.
Recreation[edit]
- Looks good! ;)
End of GA Review:[edit]
Looks like a very good article and surprising interesting. I would prefer that parts of the article be combined so it doesn't look like a list. I will put this article on hold for seven days. Thanks! Carbrera (talk) 00:48, 4 April 2016 (UTC)