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Former good article nomineeLoco de Amor (Jerry Rivera song) was a Music good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
August 1, 2021Good article nomineeNot listed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Loco de Amor (Jerry Rivera song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:57, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

My honour to review a Wikicup nom again! --K. Peake 08:57, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • "his seventh studio album" → "his seventh studio album,"
  • Add a sentence after the writing/production one mentioning that in 1996 the song was released as the album's lead single
  • "The song, along with the rest of the album, is a" → "It is a" because the entirety of the album's musical style is not notable
  • "tune in which" → "tune, in which"
  • "The song was met with positive" → "The song received positive"
  • Add a comma after music critics
  • "who called it a standout from Fresco." → "being identified by them as a standout from the album."
  • ""Loco de Amor" was nominated for" → "It was nominated for"
  • "chart where it spent eight weeks on this position." → "chart, spending eight weeks at this position on the latter chart."
  • Mention in the music video sentence that it is set in a barn

Background and composition

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  • Remove pipe on Fresco
  • "produced by Sergio George and Cuto Soto" → "that was produced by Sergio George and Cuto Soto in full"
  • "The songs in the album were" → "The album's songs were"
  • "Mary Lauret, and Alejandro Vennazi." → "Mary Lauret and Alejandro Vennazi" plus mention specifically in this sentence that Lauret composed the song since the chorus can be in its own sentence
  • The album being called a salsa release can stay in background but is not enough to source the song's genre; add a sentence saying "Musically "Loco de Amor" is a salsa song." or something similar, using the Vista ref to back this up
  • "Rivera sings in the chorus:" → "On the chorus, Rivera sings:" but this is not backed up by [1]

Promotion and reception

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  • "praised it "a" → "praised the track as "a"
  • "called one of the album's stand outs while Billboard editor John Lannert cited as" → "called the track one of the album's stand outs while Billboard editor John Lannert cited it as"
  • Remove usage of the before Cashbox
  • "regarded it as" → "regarded the song as"
  • "The track was recognized as" → "It was recognized as"
  • "In the US," → "In the United States," per MOS:US
  • "chart where it spent eight weeks on" → "chart, where it spent eight weeks at"
  • "it ended 1996" → "the song ended 1996"

Charts

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  • Good

See also

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  • Good

Notes

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  • The punctuation should only be inside speech marks if it is like that for the original quote; edit the prose if this is the case

References

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Final comments and verdict

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